Bits of blur and sip

Lipstick on a glass could be a bad cliché dropped off on the corner between romance novel and love poem. But that cliché doesn’t have to intrude on “date night” or any other night for that matter because that image has options. And while it’s tempting to settle in on the first descriptive phrasing that comes to mind, it’s much more creative (and rewarding) to slow down to think and wonder, transform what could easily be a cliché into interesting or insightful imagery. Other than rub your thumb against the rim of the glass, what else is possible with that image?

In rusted haze and clouded light,
gold petals spray the glass
with shimmer,
pasted like fingerprints,
bits of blur and sip.

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Categories: Inspiration, Photography, Writing

2 Comments on “Bits of blur and sip”

  1. May 16, 2013 at 12:33 pm #

    sticky remnant of
    two hearts at the crossroads
    one last moment
    together

    • May 16, 2013 at 8:11 pm #

      “Remnant” is a nice word. “Crossroads” is an interesting image.

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